LostXOR@fedia.io to Greentext@sh.itjust.works · 2 months agoAnon finds a hutfedia.ioexternal-linkmessage-square59fedilinkarrow-up1631arrow-down121
arrow-up1610arrow-down1external-linkAnon finds a hutfedia.ioLostXOR@fedia.io to Greentext@sh.itjust.works · 2 months agomessage-square59fedilink
minus-squareDiddlydee@feddit.uklinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up48·2 months agoI can see the intention of the story, but how you wouldn’t notice many windows on a small hut when you approached makes it not work for me.
minus-squareLostXOR@fedia.ioOPlinkfedilinkarrow-up15·2 months agoMaybe there’s none on the side of the hut Anon approaches from?
minus-squaremortemtyrannis@lemmy.mllinkfedilinkarrow-up4·2 months agoAlso the lighting. If it’s dark outside how do you light up a person looking into a window in a way they appear as a painting instead of weird shadows.
I can see the intention of the story, but how you wouldn’t notice many windows on a small hut when you approached makes it not work for me.
Maybe there’s none on the side of the hut Anon approaches from?
Also the lighting. If it’s dark outside how do you light up a person looking into a window in a way they appear as a painting instead of weird shadows.